Love the story, very well written. the way you describe the route up (or down?) the road of cuckoldry is arousing and thrilling.
just read book 19. Now I'm a little disappointed. Ray's slow seduction ends abruptly. Am I right that between the plan for saturday (the old jungle-gym) and the first time „It‘s happened“, the slow development is missing? and this should have been the best part of this episode!