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Out of Afrika - Chapter 55

Curt Bruch
14 min read
5.00 star(s) 2 ratings
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Pros: This chapter serves as a great way for newer followers of this site to become aware of so many great previous chapters in this long running saga. Hopefully they'll look up those earlier chapters you've noted so they'll become as big a fan as I've become.
Cons: It's been far too long since your last chapter. Hopefully you'll
find the time to add some new ones.
Out Of Afrika is a multi-chapter saga that draws you into a world where you witness the power that something as simple as a 'free app' on a smart phone can totally change how you think about many things, not the least of which is how you think about black African males.
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My Perfect Day

Curt Bruch
9 min read
4.50 star(s) 6 ratings
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Pros: One of the more honest protrayals of what most often happens when a husband who has accepted his lack of ability to satisfy his wife sexually finds himself dealing with the introduction of a more capble male into the couple's sex life.
Cons: It's not filled with exagurations of penis size, or any of the other trip-wire terms some writers typically tend to add to their story in an attempt to quickly generate an erection of minor eruption by the average male reader, who can't last more than a minute if they're lucky enough to last that long when and if their wife lets them have a mercy fuck.
Curt, you never cese to amaze me with your thoughtful, well written stories. If only everyone could match your skill imagine how many more husbands would be rushing to share these kinds of stories with their wife/GFs.
Pros: Given the growing interest in black breeding among white couples this story hits all the right notes. Looking forward to chapter 2.
Cons: Would like to see husband retain some of his ability to get hard. In order for that to occur the drug mixture needs to be adjusted. Perhaps introducing him to a cage as well as what black seed tastes would help turn him into a more accepting and understanding cuckold?
Stories reflecting the changing attitudes among a growing number of white married couples helps to convince other white couples to undertake similar activities in their own marriages.
SnakeCharmer
SnakeCharmer
Thanks you so much for the high rating! I appreciate it very much. I like your idea of the cage, I will give it some thought. It looks like others like the idea as well. I have not begun writing part 2 yet.
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