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Lutheran Maid
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    1. ToBeABoyToy
      ToBeABoyToy
      The bitch testing series may be some of your best yet. Loved the psychological molding of both woman and wimp. And the interracial aspect as well.
    2. NTRwriter
      NTRwriter
      Oof... I'm in the middle of IOT right now and am thoroughly impressed, not just by your writing but also by your creativity! I found you through the Amazon Kindle store and am pleasantly surprised you're active in this community as well. I'll keep an eye out for what else is to come! :) Also, I was wondering if there are any spin-offs?
    3. Coreuser
      Coreuser
      Finished IOT, feel utterly drained, nearly gave up after the party when Thomas was being treated so badly, resolved at the end. Cant do a proper constructive review in 420 characters but a very promising first novel. I will have to give up Lutheran Maid for a bit now.
      1. Lutheran Maid
        Lutheran Maid
        Coreuser, thanks for the review. The trick with a novel is to create a world within which sexual acts happen. So it has to get inside the head of people and that's what I tried to do here, from modest beginnings. I am planning a sequel, where the key players run a training camp on a island, a rather disciplined place. Meantime a new collection of stories, some longer ones will be out next month I hope. :-)
        Jun 30, 2018
    4. Coreuser
      Coreuser
      IOT is excellent so far (p110, it arrived yesterday), using the extra space to develop everything further.
      I suspect you have the spelling checker set to autocorrect as most of your stories have not so much typos as wrong words, its usually obvious what the right word should be, eg menage a toi top of p106 IOT. I speed read but wrong words stick out like a sore thumb to me. If you ever need a proof reader......
      1. Lutheran Maid
        Lutheran Maid
        Sorry about the glitches. I suspect that I have it set on American spelling too. I'm working on a new collection of stories and several of these are longer. 'Taking the shots' in 'Infidelity' out next month I suspect, is my most satisfying story to date. I am fascinated by the submissive male psyche and the dominant female one. Its the dance of sex. Each is reliant in some way on the other. Thanks for the feedback.
        Jun 27, 2018
    5. Coreuser
      Coreuser
      Plays are better on the radio than on TV because the pictures are better!
      You conjure up such vivid erotic perfect images in my head that its almost unbearable!, I have ordered your book as the only criticism I would make is your DW stuff is so short, vignettes really.You make the women sound so gorgeous and sexily turned out.
      The violence toward the husband I don't get, but sexy women sexually dominated by BBC is.
      1. Lutheran Maid
        Lutheran Maid
        Thanks for the feedback Coreuser. I'm with you on the radio point. You make fair points about short story writing, how long should each be? Some of the stories in my books are longer and there is a cuckolding novel too, 'The Intimacy of Three'. I'm going to post a slightly longer short story today on DW and hope that you enjoy that, 'teaching self hatred.' LM
        Jun 26, 2018
    6. 3ballz
      3ballz
      Lutheran Maid, Thankyou for your latest collection of stories. 'The Visit' destroyed me and brought back some lovely, but painful memories of times gone by. The psychological aspect of what you are writing is something I empathise with and it needs further exploration and expansion from talented writers like yourself. Please continue with an unrestrained abandon!!

      Kind Regards 3balls
      1. Lutheran Maid
        Lutheran Maid
        Thanks 3baliz! Whilst Britain is changing there remains an underlying order where people know their place. Superior and well bred women are used to getting the best of everything and that includes cock. Tradition is important and that is sustained by inferiors admiring their betters. Order and discipline are everything. Arguably there is nothing sexier than a spoilt upper class bitch! ;-)
        Jun 16, 2018
    7. White Extinction
      White Extinction
      You are a writing machine, LM.
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      2. Lutheran Maid
        Lutheran Maid
        WE there can be excess I know, or perhaps it is a compliment?! There are permutations of cuckold sex, associated with different viewpoints, different characters and contexts. As the mind is almost bottomless regarding emotions and reasoning, it adds whole new avenues on to the basics of sex. Best wishes WE, Lutheran Maid.
        May 17, 2018
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    8. 3ballz
      3ballz
      I read your book last week Lutheran Maid. A joy for those of us into this particular strain of cuckoldry. Many thanks for the time and effort you have taken over the past few months to write it. Please continue as you approach this subject from a perspective that is is so heavily weighted in the psychological make-up and relationships between the characters that it is very powerful.
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      2. Lutheran Maid
        Lutheran Maid
        That's generous of you 3baliz. Aim to please for friends of the psychological sex bent! Lutheran.
        Apr 4, 2018
    9. The humble cleaner
      The humble cleaner
      Dear Lutheran Maid, I want to thank you for your outstanding work, and also congratulate you on the publication of "The Intimacy of Three". Having recently purchased the latter on Amazon I heartily recommend others to do so - my expectations were high and I was not disappointed...superb!
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      2. Lutheran Maid
        Lutheran Maid
        Thats really kind of you HC. The challenge in 'The intimacy of Three' was to build a context, characters, a situation. What we're accustomed to here in Darkwanderer is a raunchy quick fix of eroticism. In a novel, you have to connect the highlights, convey the journey. Hope to write a sequel where Claire really does drive bitch hood on to the full!
        Apr 3, 2018
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    10. krushone
      krushone
      Love your writing. Your stories have a depth that is unique. I would love to read a longer, connected, piece that ties all of the themes touched on in the individual stories, together. Hopefully you’re working on a novel we can all enjoy soon. Thank you for your creative work. Please continue! I wait eagerly for whatever you post next.
      1. Lutheran Maid
        Lutheran Maid
        Thanks Krushone! You're right, there is appeal in extending a story into a novel and that is certainly on the cards through Kindle or such like. I'll do an alert when such is ready.
        Oct 29, 2017
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    11. Newmantoplease
      Newmantoplease
      I’ve just found out about you man! I love your stories, are you a white guy by any chance? That would make things even hotter tbh.
      1. Lutheran Maid
        Lutheran Maid
        I'm a psychology graduate who likes getting inside the head of characters. Fucking (the physical act) and similar is only the tip of the iceberg! One of the problems with endless video clips of the act is that eventually it numbs, it becomes repetitive. What adds spice is what is going on in the heads of the characters. Words have a role to play! Thanks for the compliment by the way! Lutheran Maid.
        Apr 3, 2018
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    12. 3ballz
      3ballz
      You have highlighted it in a number of your stories the importance of breaking the resolve of the beta male and that he unequivocally understands his place in the presence of the alpha and his bitch. It was like an epiphany for me when I finally acknowledged my position and now it is so much better as a maid for my master and ex. When I see the pleasurable expressions on their faces it truly fills my heart with joy.
    13. 3ballz
      3ballz
      It makes my little peepee hard imagining I am the cuckolded sub in them. Thanks Lutheran maid.
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      2. Lutheran Maid
        Lutheran Maid
        Some men are to be used aren't they. But they're still useful. Using a mans mouth to masturbate on is OK by me.
        Oct 16, 2017
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    14. Kimberly Ann
      Kimberly Ann
      I love your stories. Makes me wet thinking I’m the woman your writing about
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      2. Lutheran Maid
        Lutheran Maid
        Thanks Kimberley. The idea of a powerful, an authoritative man taking me, dismissing his competitor, that seems sexy!
        Oct 16, 2017
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    15. CumSlurpingCuckold
      CumSlurpingCuckold
      You put out such great literature. You take the words out of my mouth and the sperm out of my balls.
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    16. HgMummy
      HgMummy
      Tom has it great. The sub hubs always get the boot when its time. His woman and Wes let him help. Are they real people?
    17. smakmr
      smakmr
      Thanks for some great stories. Looking forward to seeing how things pan out with Randolph in the recent story co-operating with Randolph
    18. jonnie777
      jonnie777
      very nice cuckold stories like make me wet
    19. 3ballz
      3ballz
      Wonderful stories Lutheran Maid, muchly appreciated!
    20. CumSlurpingCuckold
      CumSlurpingCuckold
      Happy Valentine's Day. I hope you have a throat full of a cock lined up for your wimp husband today. :-)
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