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Bullied and Feminized by mean girls

Pros: Femdom content
Sissification
Cons: Was expecting an orgy at the end with all the girls. Big build but disappointing end
Please make more stories focussing on worshipping female feet! You wrote most of the story so well and there isn’t enough foot worship content on this site.
Pros: Different take on femdom & cuckolding
Cons: Too many characters who didn't do very much
I gave it high marks for the creativity of the story, but lowered for it's execution. The main charcater's ****** was introduced, then they play no real role in the story. It mostly involves a completely different group of girls.

On a technical side, you had a few awkward time jumps. The setting/scene seemed to change without a cursory 'Then a few days later when ..." type of a line to kick off the next paragraph.

I read it because I was hoping that the main character would get treated cruelly and humiliated, and he was. But on the quality side, I think a bit of pruning and polishing could make it a lot better.
Amara6969
Amara6969
Thanks so much for the positive reviews, I will improve my future stories based on your suggestions
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