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White Is the New Black

Pros: exceptional plot. pro level writing.
Cons: really wish this was a longer piece... but that isn't my decision. it's just so well done, i didn't want the story to end (so soon).

then again... i can't count the number of stories that WOULD have been great had the writer been disciplined enough to leave the reader wanting more vs beating a good thing into the ground (and not in the whiteboi beatdown hot kind of way)....

so. i wanted more. i want more. that speaks very well of the story.
prolly not for everyone - but if u dig BNWO and white male disposal fetish, THIS one will leave ur head spinning.

the writer is skilled - upper level writing in this and their other stories.

writer has a better than working knowledge of current racial tensions in USA and does an EXCEPTIONAL job of presenting this dystopian take on an alternate, brutal (for white folks) reality.

this story can be enjoyed from multiple perspectives. if BNWO/white male disposal is ur jam, this story delivers. if u like to read a well constructed story, this story delivers. for the person who likes to read between the lines, this story can be read as a satirical take on race, racial politics and the brutality of the "justice" system in the USA.

this story works as great stroke smut and it works as satire in the tradition of Swift and Burroughs... either would have been great - BOTH? i think this writer knows a bit about what they want to do and how to do it....

BRAVO!
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