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Higher Education

Pros: Great character develpment. Great pacing. Well written sex scenes.
Cons: A few but none worth mentioning.
I'm loving this story. I can't wait to see where this goes next. The girls are all so varied and well fleshed out (No pun intended). The dialogue and character building are so well done I'm amazed at how fast I finished all 20 chapters. Now I just have to wait until chaper 21 is out.
Beautiful story, please dont stop posting
Pros: An excellent, well written story with interesting characters and development. Time spent to develop the story is nice making it feel more real. The sex is well done and interesting which is a real pleasure to read.
Cons: Many threads /characters to follow which can be hard sometimes both for the reader (and writer) to keep control of. I would suggest avoiding adding too many new characters but work on those already introduced or mentioned.
All in all an excellent contribution to the genre and promises much to come from this writer. I look forward to seeing it develop.
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EbonLand
Thank you for your kind words and thoughtful suggestions.
Pros: Such detailed story of deprived Hannah discovering Superior Black Men and Lesbian love!!
Can't wait for Charlotte to discover the joys of Superior Black Men and tender Lesbian love.
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EbonLand
Thank you for the kind review! I spent a while writing the opening chapters of this story before posting. Charlotte will be corrupted. But I haven't written that part yet. I'm toying with a few ideas, and it will happen soon, but I'm not sure exactly when. I enjoy slow build ups, but Charlotte has already had some so it will probably won't take as long as Hannah. Of course, Charlotte has friends and ****** from the deep South who need to be educated as well...
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