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Caribbean Inspiration

Caribbean Inspiration

agilecat
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27 min read
5.00 star(s) 2 ratings
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Pros: Nice descriptions and energy, the characters were very believable.
Cons: It's a little short.
The Author's use of descriptions is very erotic, and I would have enjoyed more. Especially more character development. I DO hope the author provides a continuation? I would love to read Chapter 2!
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Yes, I agree it was my first effort and is just a short story. There will be more and I will take on board your points about character development. Thanks for the review :)
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Flirting with the Dark Side

takehercuckme
23 min read
5.00 star(s) 1 ratings
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Pros: Fantastic and creative writing, with grammar that makes it very easy to read.
Cons: Chapter 2 isn't out yet!
Well-done by an obviously experienced Author. The reader is right there with the characters, especially in the beginning. The characters are credible and identifiable. It makes me want to visit Justine's!
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