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[sophie_m]

tl;dr--Once the mods approve a story people can't comment anymore, which makes sense b/c it keeps the forum nice and neat. So, I wanted to make a thread for people to do that if they wanted, or to talk about what they liked or didn't like about a story (it doesn't have to be mine!). Or just ask questions!

Since I'm apparently a degenerate who can't stop writing about my private life online, I also wanted a place to write short things where I don't have to spend hours and hours crafting a "real" story first. I thought maybe I'd float ideas or just write about things happening in my life. Don't worry, I promise not to write boring stuff--I know why we're all here! Also AMA! I may even answer.

I'm also in the mood to write because I had a very enjoyable evening yesterday. The guy I'm seeing now is a police detective, and I haven't seen him in about a week and a half, for what should be obvious reasons. I'm pretty sure he's not had a great time over that period--I can't imagine how it must feel to be a black cop in America right now. I already know he and his close friends HATE their white colleagues because they're racists, so yeah.

Anyway, also not why you're here. I got a text from in the afternoon him that just said, "I'll be there at 9." That's generally how I'm informed he's coming unless he wants to take me out, in which case he'll tell me what to wear. Once he got here, be barely said three words to me the rest of the time. At least not more than that together--name-calling doesn't count imo. He was clearly stressed and needed to get that out of his system. It's kind of like I'm a therapist. A therapist who gives head on command, which is the best kind I feel like.

I was pretty much immediately ordered to my knees to give him a blowjob, which was accompanied by a steady stream of degrading name-calling, and intermittently interrupted by me getting slapped around a bit. He does that just because he likes to, but it was definitely more of a thing last night. He didn't even bother taking me into my bedroom until after he'd already fucked me once. The first time he just put me on the sofa on all fours kind of braced by the armrest and fucked me like that until he came in me. Then he was like, "Don't move bitch," (that's three words if you don't believe me and are keeping count) and came around in front of me. He forced his cock down my throat pretty hard, and I gagged and couldn't keep my mouth around him. That misbehavior earned me another slap, but he finally let me catch my breath and clean him up.

He wasn't mollified for long, but at least I was more comfortable in my bed for round two. (Also his scent lingered on everything after he left, which was nice. The scent of Palmer's causes me to have a practically pavlovian reaction at this point in my life). Most of the rest of his visit was spent simultaneously fucking and choking me in mish, with no pause in the steady stream of verbal abuse. I lost count of how many times I came. I definitely woke up sore and happy this morning though!

So I'm thinking of making those events the last chapter in this long thing I have put three chapters of up on here so far. It would be like the tenth or so chapter depending on how some of the others play out. I figure I started writing it since I was bored in COVID quarantine, so maybe it would make a nice ending? What do you guys think? Worth it or nah?

 

[sophie_m]

also, this has nothing to do with the above but i think it's both hilarious and sad af that it exists:

 

[Thehappycuckold]

tl;dr--Once the mods approve a story people can't comment anymore, which makes sense b/c it keeps the forum nice and neat. So, I wanted to make a thread for people to do that if they wanted, or to talk about what they liked or didn't like about a story (it doesn't have to be mine!). Or just ask questions!

Since I'm apparently a degenerate who can't stop writing about my private life online, I also wanted a place to write short things where I don't have to spend hours and hours crafting a "real" story first. I thought maybe I'd float ideas or just write about things happening in my life. Don't worry, I promise not to write boring stuff--I know why we're all here! Also AMA! I may even answer.

I'm also in the mood to write because I had a very enjoyable evening yesterday. The guy I'm seeing now is a police detective, and I haven't seen him in about a week and a half, for what should be obvious reasons. I'm pretty sure he's not had a great time over that period--I can't imagine how it must feel to be a black cop in America right now. I already know he and his close friends HATE their white colleagues because they're racists, so yeah.

Anyway, also not why you're here. I got a text from in the afternoon him that just said, "I'll be there at 9." That's generally how I'm informed he's coming unless he wants to take me out, in which case he'll tell me what to wear. Once he got here, be barely said three words to me the rest of the time. At least not more than that together--name-calling doesn't count imo. He was clearly stressed and needed to get that out of his system. It's kind of like I'm a therapist. A therapist who gives head on command, which is the best kind I feel like.

I was pretty much immediately ordered to my knees to give him a blowjob, which was accompanied by a steady stream of degrading name-calling, and intermittently interrupted by me getting slapped around a bit. He does that just because he likes to, but it was definitely more of a thing last night. He didn't even bother taking me into my bedroom until after he'd already fucked me once. The first time he just put me on the sofa on all fours kind of braced by the armrest and fucked me like that until he came in me. Then he was like, "Don't move bitch," (that's three words if you don't believe me and are keeping count) and came around in front of me. He forced his cock down my throat pretty hard, and I gagged and couldn't keep my mouth around him. That misbehavior earned me another slap, but he finally let me catch my breath and clean him up.

He wasn't mollified for long, but at least I was more comfortable in my bed for round two. (Also his scent lingered on everything after he left, which was nice. The scent of Palmer's causes me to have a practically pavlovian reaction at this point in my life). Most of the rest of his visit was spent simultaneously fucking and choking me in mish, with no pause in the steady stream of verbal abuse. I lost count of how many times I came. I definitely woke up sore and happy this morning though!

So I'm thinking of making those events the last chapter in this long thing I have put three chapters of up on here so far. It would be like the tenth or so chapter depending on how some of the others play out. I figure I started writing it since I was bored in COVID quarantine, so maybe it would make a nice ending? What do you guys think? Worth it or nah?

Your writing is enjoyable, genuine, and you’re on the right site for the topic. Write it! Write about all of it. As long as you’re enjoying the way he treats you and it’s not unhealthy it frees us as the reader from a nagging guilt from deriving pleasure from it. This site has a lot of content, but so little is based in actual experience, we need more writing like yours, @LexiLexi and @Ellen

And I know some others are going to be just as curious as I, but does he ever use his handcuffs on you?

 

[sophie_m]

I went to a rally and march yesterday, which was both empowering and scary. It was huge and incredibly diverse. As a tweet a number of people on this site have quoted says, don't open your mouth for black dick and close it on black issues. I'm happy to say there were a ton of white girls (and guys) there answering that second call to action. I feel like a lot of them ended up answering the first part later too. (also grammarly doesn't recognize tweet as a word? actually? get your shit together!)

 

[sophie_m]

Your writing is enjoyable, genuine, and you’re on the right site for the topic. Write it! Write about all of it. As long as you’re enjoying the way he treats you and it’s not unhealthy it frees us as the reader from a nagging guilt from deriving pleasure from it. This site has a lot of content, but so little is based in actual experience, we need more writing like yours, @LexiLexi and @Ellen

And I know some others are going to be just as curious as I, but does he ever use his handcuffs on you?

Thanks for the kind words! I'm so happy people are enjoying some of this stuff. And no he doesn't. You know those things cops use now that are basically big zip ties? He likes those--quicker, easier, and more versatile.

 

[Thehappycuckold]

Thanks for the kind words! I'm so happy people are enjoying some of this stuff. And no he doesn't. You know those things cops use now that are basically big zip ties? He likes those--quicker, easier, and more versatile.

There’s something to be said for unrelenting steel shackles but it sounds like the zip ties are more than effective. Do you spend a lot of time zip tied? More versatile how?

I’m glad the protest was well attended and safe. It has to be pretty obvious by now that there’s a lot of systemic problems that need to be addressed.

 

[Bangasauras]

I went to a rally and march yesterday, which was both empowering and scary. It was huge and incredibly diverse. As a tweet a number of people on this site have quoted says, don't open your mouth for black dick and close it on black issues. I'm happy to say there were a ton of white girls (and guys) there answering that second call to action. I feel like a lot of them ended up answering the first part later too. (also grammarly doesn't recognize tweet as a word? actually? get your shit together!)

Would love to see you write a story about a raceist white police man having his wife and ********* participate in BLM movement and breed black and also save there black lover and his friends and hide then in there homes

 

[ukBBCpig]

Hey Soph

Thanks for this thread it almost feels as if in a way you are cucking all of us by doing so , an idea I find simply exquisite! I really like the way you reflect on things as you go, I mean that whole reflection about his aftershave is so powerful, not to mention everything else too. Mention more too. One detail I love about oral which even porn manages to lose is when an oral giver gets that lovely string of saliva because they are more focused on worshipping the cock they have in their mouth than what they look like. I find this throat lube as I call it excellent for anal cos it is thicker than just spit. Seeing the string of mucus hanging down between a pair of perky breasts is simply delightful.

I wanted to ask whether you have multiple bulls or is it more like a casual relationship with cop_dude? Maybe you could have this/these bulls as a second story theme? This saves you becoming too focused on your primary story, and the more stories you have then the less you'll feel the need to shoehorn all of your experiences into one - even if they are all true then it could still make a story overloaded. For instance, when I got divorced a few years back I had an astonishing amount of adventures in the gay community, but if i were writing a story about them now then I'd not try to fit them all in to one multi-parted story - even though they all happened to me in the space of just a few years. It would be a story about my tranny era, then one about my gay era, then the black guy era, then fisting, (fists are bigger than even BBC - well, wider anyway and can get a lot deeper with practice too! Never been fisted by a black guy though... thinkingface). A story is ultimately a container for a particular theme and when you try to pack too many themes in it the reader can become overloaded. You want your reader to be relaxed and having a good cum not be trying to parse between multiple different things some of which turn them on and others which do not. So your other one seems to encompass more of a traditional bdsm line, whereas these 'true stories' could be vignettes with less need to fully justify later decisions by the protagonist as would a normal story if you wanted it to make sense.

Maybe these stories could be from the POV of a cuckoldress telling her cuck about her adventures, I know you don't have a cuck yourself but it could give you practice writing an unrelated but yet affiliated theme. If you don't want the cuck to be in there at all you could make it in the style of a letter to him. Or it could be future you tell her bf/hubby about her younger days to get him off before saying its just a fantasy before turning to the camera at end before saying, "or was it..."

Best o/

 

[sophie_m]

I wanted to ask whether you have multiple bulls or is it more like a casual relationship with cop_dude? Maybe you could have this/these bulls as a second story theme? This saves you becoming too focused on your primary story, and the more stories you have then the less you'll feel the need to shoehorn all of your experiences into one - even if they are all true then it could still make a story overloaded. For instance, when I got divorced a few years back I had an astonishing amount of adventures in the gay community, but if i were writing a story about them now then I'd not try to fit them all in to one multi-parted story - even though they all happened to me in the space of just a few years. It would be a story about my tranny era, then one about my gay era, then the black guy era, then fisting, (fists are bigger than even BBC - well, wider anyway and can get a lot deeper with practice too! Never been fisted by a black guy though... thinkingface). A story is ultimately a container for a particular theme and when you try to pack too many themes in it the reader can become overloaded. You want your reader to be relaxed and having a good cum not be trying to parse between multiple different things some of which turn them on and others which do not. So your other one seems to encompass more of a traditional bdsm line, whereas these 'true stories' could be vignettes with less need to fully justify later decisions by the protagonist as would a normal story if you wanted it to make sense.

One of the cool things about "working" from home is that I can respond to stuff like this and take time to think about where I want to go with my writing (I do miss the occasional lunch hour bj tho). I do like the idea of just kind of continuing chronologically, basically like what you've described. Like, maybe breaking things up into the time I am writing about now, college, and then basically now as I have my first "real" job and am attempting to adult. Not sure how I should feel about being slutty enough to have to break things into a trilogy, but here we are I guess. I guess think The Story of O but from first person? The whole thing is about evolving, and I guess it really is a vanity project, even though I'd like it to maybe be an ebook one day. I'm a lot of editing and writing away from that though. To answer your other question, yes it's exclusive, although he does occasionally share me with two of his close friends/colleagues.

 

[Ellen]

Hmmm Im not a big fan of short stories but since I like your writing style I will give it a chance.