The Author's use of descriptions is very erotic, and I would have enjoyed more. Especially more character development. I DO hope the author provides a continuation? I would love to read Chapter 2!
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Caribbean Inspiration
- Author agilecat
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agilecat
Yes, I agree it was my first effort and is just a short story. There will be more and I will take on board your points about character development. Thanks for the review :)